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To look into his eyes—
Those that scheme your own demise—
Is to relinquish every selfish desire

To go so far
As to blindly light your own funeral pyre

And only relish
In that lavish gift of insanity

To crave his glances,
His graces, his subtle advances
Is to delve into unforgiving vanity

To sigh into his embrace—
Your mind gone away without a trace—
Is to be consumed wholly and completely

To give in and
Suffocate in silence—alone—discretely

And with bated breath
Love the very essence of what is him

To carve out your own heart
Bury it with him—to never be apart
Is to sicken yourself with sweetest sin

To cherish one last kiss—
Is to die—in loathsome bliss
I'll leave this up to you.

The font in the preview image: Dirt2 SoulStalker --taken from dafont.com
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:iconsgste:
Wooaaaah... deep. I really do like it! :)
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:iconnoxsatukeir:
Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
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DevonEaton Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really like the words to this, but I'm not sure I understand the structure. I read it several times, but it seemed very halting no matter how I read it.
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:iconnoxsatukeir:
It's free verse. :shrug:

Anyway, if you're looking for a structure, it's there (minutely though).
A--A--B EB EC DDC
A--A--B EB EC DDC
A--A
(E's don't rhyme with anything)
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HarleKlown Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Harley Quinn. :iconharleyquinnlaplz:
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:iconnoxsatukeir:
She would be the perfect narrator!! XD :heart:
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:iconsumgie1:
Expressive. :)
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:iconnoxsatukeir:
Thank you! :heart:
I was kind of in a very dramatic mood when I wrote this... :P :D
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:iconsumgie1:
You're welcome. :)
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heaven-is-lonely Nov 3, 2012  Student General Artist
i love it!! i need to show this to my boyfriend...
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